Month: November 2017

New Belief Crumbles NaNoWriMo day 20

New Belief Crumbles NaNoWriMo day 20

Today, the main character has failed his test. His character arc is in ruins. In the sequel to the second plot point, the new belief crumbles.

Second Pinch Point NaNoWriMo day 19

Second Pinch Point NaNoWriMo day 19

The second pinch point is the beginning of the collapse. Whatever you decide to do to ruin your hero’s plan, make it a powerful one.

Writing Fight Scenes NaNoWriMo day 18

Writing Fight Scenes NaNoWriMo day 18

Tips for Writing Fight Scenes

On day 18 everything seems to be going according to plan. Your character should be working hard on accomplishing her goal, which often means that she will be in the middle of a fight. Writing fight scenes can be intimidating, and many good writers often struggle in this area. Everyone will have a different approach to fight scenes, but here are a few guidelines to get you started.

Don’t bring a catapult to a space battle.

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Your weapons should be historically logical. (Yes, I know about lightsabers, but that is truly the exception.) If you want your contemporary UF heroine to run around swinging a sword, then you really need a good explanation. Sorry, but guns are way more effective.

What about fantasy worlds?

The rule still applies. There is nothing humans have proven themselves more capable of than building machines to kill each other. Even during the “dark ages” while most classical knowledge faded into ignorance, somehow military technology found a way to improve. People will always use the best weapon available. Don’t bring a catapult to a space battle.

If your weapon of choice is magic, you will need to identify a magic system and keep the rules consistent. (Soft magic is more difficult to portray in battles since it is too easy to make consistency errors or Dues ex Machina solutions.)

Keeping it real?

You need to know how realistic you want the fighting to be. This is a question for fantasy writers. When characters have extraordinary abilities, they must be consistent throughout the entire book. A character who can jump off a ten-story building should not break their ankle on a tree root five chapters later. So make sure character abilities remain consistent throughout the entire book.

Do your research

Mike Loades (if you don’t know this guy, you should.) Mike Loades is an expert in weaponry from pre-history through WWI. Also, his knowledge is not limited to European/American weaponry. His website and youtube pages are a great resource.

If you can’t find what you need here, youtube is filled with videos on almost every fighting technique you could imagine. Spend an afternoon watching videos. Notice how difficult it is to fight for long periods of time. (Fantasy writers take note!)

Then forget most of it.

While it’s important for you to be able to visualize what is happening to your characters, trying to describe this on paper often falls flat. Why? Fight scenes need to have short MRU’s (No, it’s not going away, so click here if you need a refresher.) Describing every tiny action means choosing between slowing the pacing or cutting out emotion. Since readers connect more with emotions, the bullet list of who hit who where gets tedious.

Identify the purpose of the fight.

Is the real story the external battle, or the character’s internal struggle?Writing Fight Scenes

Some examples

In this excerpt, the actual fight isn’t important. The real story is what the main character learns during the exchange. Notice most of the fight is summarized.

He struck first. Low and tentative. She beat it back. He crossed left throwing out another short sequence. Predictable. If she took the offensive, she could beat him. 

Her injured back flared again. Or she might cripple herself right before their final trials. Better to hold back and wait for Stone to make a mistake. It wouldn’t take long.

His pace increased. Perhaps he was getting bored too. He began what she could only assume was the Queen’s Sequence, the usually beautiful calligraphy transformed into hapless, wild swinging. Two backward steps kept her out of the fray. It also gave her a glimpse of the Captain. Narrow black eyes questioned her.

In the second excerpt, the fight is the more important aspect. But I’ve broken another “rule” by intentionally pulling the camera back to give the reader a better view of the action.

As she retreated, the intensity of the strikes increased. Stone’s attacks grew wilder, unfocused. Trapped by rage, he ignored the forms and hammered away at her instead. It was sloppy but effective, and it was giving him time to regain control of his emotions. She had to end this soon.

She found her opportunity when Stone stepped into a hole, momentarily throwing him off balance. Her sword arced toward the opening. The edge of his mouth twitched into a smirk. It was a ploy! The tip of his blade caught her guard, ripping the weapon from her grasp. He thrust toward her heart.

She dropped to the ground and slammed her boot into his groin. Then, she rolled away in a desperate move that landed her on top of her sword. Stone drove toward her with a murderous snarl.

Grabbing the long sword, she blocked the downward slash inches above her head in a frantic defense that forced her to grip the blade with her off hand. The blow drove it into her palm. She threw him aside, slamming the hilt into his forehead. He staggered backward giving her the opportunity to stand. She got as far as her knees before a violent tug on her hair stopped her.

Notice in both these examples, most of the actual swordplay is left to the reader’s imagination. This allows the reader to focus on the story, rather than the choreography. The reader needs to know the character’s thoughts and the results of the fight. (who was injured, etc.) Important events, like her ‘dirty pool’ move and the moment she almost died, are shown, but the majority of the fight was summarized.

But isn’t that telling?

Yes. Not all telling is bad. In this case, summarizing the details of the fight allow for better pacing and move the focus to more important elements, like internal dialogue or the results of the fight.

If you are writing in deep POV, pull the camera in close for fights and ignore anything that isn’t right in front of the POV character.

Writing fight scenes does take some special consideration, but they don’t have to be difficult. Make sure you keep the reader focused on the story and your fight scene will move the plot along.

You are now more than halfway through your novel. End this scene with an indication that things are about to go horribly wrong.

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Writing Action Scenes NaNoWriMo day 17

Writing Action Scenes NaNoWriMo day 17

Writing actions scenes might seem intimidating, but by following these seven easy tips, your action scenes can be the most effective in your novel

Keeping low action scenes interesting NaNoWriMo day 16

Keeping low action scenes interesting NaNoWriMo day 16

Low action scenes don’t have to be boing. Tips for keeping the forward momentum in your story even during your low action scenes.

The Protagonist Gets Proactive NaNoWriMo day 15

The Protagonist Gets Proactive NaNoWriMo day 15

Time for your character to take matters into her own hands

driving the plot forward with the character lie-www.themanuscriptshredder.comDay 15: It’s time for your character to go on the offensive. Here, your main character will begin to make her plans for defeating the villain/antagonistic forces. Whether these battle plans are literal or figurative, they should reflect the changes made in her character arc.

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In this scene, the character has made a partial transformation, but her arc isn’t complete. Either she has evolved her beliefs into a new lie, or she is willing to set aside her lie temporarily. (This scene will also include any character interactions that must happen before the fight begins. If you have a romance this is a good place for the couple to have a romantic moment.)

Option one: Ignoring the lieThe protagonist gets proactive

For this option, the character’s lie has been eroded enough for her to put it aside for the sake of the larger goal.

In the Lego Batman movie, Batman is willing to tolerate his new teammates if it will help him defeat the Joker.

Since the new beliefs appear to be incorporated, success seems certain. By the end of the scene, all the pieces seem to be in place. (Frequent readers of this blog will remember this as the moment my husband told our fidgety daughter that the movie was almost over and I had to correct him. lol)

Option two: A New Lie

In this option, the main character has developed a new belief, but it is not the right belief. The protagonist has changed, but the transformation is incomplete or the new belief is also untrue.

In the Lego movie Emmet still does not believe he is “The Special,” but he has gained enough confidence to lead. In this scene, Emmet rallies the troops by giving a speech celebrating his unique ability to be unspecial, and his plan of attack is based on that same belief.

Your character has committed to the task, now she needs to make her plan

Whatever plan your character hatches to defeat her villain, make sure you keep her character arc deeply involved. Whether she has formed a new lie or made the promise to set her old lie aside temporarily, her plan must reflect that decision. Plots might be actions, but stories are about characters. Keep yours in the driver’s seat.

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Recommitment to the Quest NaNoWriMo day 14

Recommitment to the Quest NaNoWriMo day 14

Recommitment is the midpoint of your novel. The hero must decide to abandon his safe but uncomfortable existence or continue his journey.

The False New Normal NaNoWriMo day 13

The False New Normal NaNoWriMo day 13

Your character’s lie has survived its first battle, but it took some damage. The next steps in the transformation arc begin with the false new normal.

Character Lie NaNoWriMo Day 12

Character Lie NaNoWriMo Day 12

The character lie fights back

You’ve just challenged your character lie, now you need to determine how the lie fights back. Your character’s response depends on the plot structure/hero type. The number of possibilities varies by opinion, but I’ll cover the three most common.

The reluctant hero

Portraying the character lie-www.themanuscriptshredder.comThe reluctant hero takes many forms, but the unifying feature is the need to be forced into action. As a result, his first instinct is to retreat. He didn’t want to be there anyway, so at the first sign of trouble, he gives up. This does not mean your hero is weak. Katniss qualifies as a reluctant hero. When she finds Peeta in the river mud, she retreats into the cave. For a while, this allows a break in the action and a chance for Peeta and Katniss to develop their relationship. But the games cannot be ignored, and eventually, Katniss is forced back into action.

The One or Hero’s Journey

In the classic hero’s journey, the first plot point is the moment when the character first learns that he cannot ignore the quest the Fates have chosen for him. Luke returns to find the Empire has destroyed his farm and murdered his aunt and uncle. In the hero’s journey, the hero will respond to the first plot pinch by turning to the mentor for help. Luke turns to Obi-Wan. As the hero begins his training, he will become reliant on the mentor further strengthening the false belief that he is not good enough.

The stubborn heroCharacter lie

The stubborn hero will either misinterpret new info or disregard it. Why? Stubborn heroes have reached their lies through life experience. Revenge is a common example. Heroes with revenge goals are not ready to give up their anger. Just having someone tell them revenge won’t make them happy is not going to have much effect.

Another good example of the stubborn hero is Joy from Inside Out. (I know I’m obsessed with this movie, but the examples are so clear.)

Joy’s lie is based on her personal experience. Consider, when a young child is upset, usually making her laugh is enough to distract her from whatever her disappointment was. This experience has taught Joy that happiness can solve any of Riley’s problems. Now that Riley is growing up, she’s becoming more emotionally complex. Joy’s solution no longer works.

Stubborn heroes aren’t stupid.

When you give your character his lie, make sure it is a logical conclusion to his backstory. Even if it isn’t the choice you would make, make sure the reader can follow the process the character used to reach his conclusion. The lie must be the result of a logical progression.

Your characters false assumptions are still ruling their actions.

Make sure you keep your character’s faults alive and well. One challenge isn’t enough to erase a lifetime of experience. The journey has only just begun.

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The First Pinch Point NaNoWriMo day 11

The First Pinch Point NaNoWriMo day 11

The character lie is the reason your character can’t get what he wants. Challenge that lie with the first pinch point.